Writing

Learning Intention

We are learning to use connectives in our writing when writing about empathy.

Succes Criteria

Use the superhero connectives

Use at least 3 different connectives

Join two simple ideas to make a compound sentence

Student Comment
I liked how the tiger and the snow leopard were playing tag together.

Writing

WALT: write a recount about multi-cultural week.

We can do this when we describe our experience using our picture plan.

Mitchell, well done on an amazing piece of writing, I really enjoyed reading your very neat and well written piece of a work!!  Your picture has to much detail as well.  Keep it up!

Writing: Capitals in the Right Place

Writing: Editing and Publishing

LEARNING INTENTION
We are learning to edit and publish our writing.

SUCCESS CRITERIA
To edit we have to:
- Correct Spelling
- Make sure out punctuation is correct
- Check it makes sense

To publish we have to:
- Write as neat as we can
- Write on every line